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		<title>TimeSplash is Back</title>
		<link>http://blog.timesplash.co.uk/2011/08/20/timesplash-is-back/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Aug 2011 05:03:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Graham</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[ <p>Well, after a brief period of unavailability, the ebook version of TimeSplash is finally back &#8211; and better than ever. Featuring a new cover, this is actually a second edition of the ebook. Some of the changes that were forced on me by my previous publisher &#8211; because of their &#8220;house style&#8221; &#8211; have [...]]]></description>
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<p><a href="https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82958"><img class="alignleft size-full wp-image-394" title="TimeSplash 180X270" src="http://blog.timesplash.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/TimeSplash-180X270.jpg" alt="TimeSplash - available now" width="180" height="270" /></a>Well, after a brief period of unavailability,<a href="https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82958" target="_blank"> the ebook version of <em>TimeSplash</em> is finally back</a> &#8211; and better than ever. Featuring a new cover, this is actually a second edition of the ebook. Some of the changes that were forced on me by my previous publisher &#8211; because of their &#8220;house style&#8221; &#8211; have now been undone. There weren&#8217;t all that many, but they have nagged at me, and now that I have control again, I&#8217;ve put the text back the way it should have been. I have to tell you, it feels great.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve also set a new price. For those who bought TimeSplash at $5.50, I apologise. I had no control over that, either. Now the price is $4.50 &#8211; which is exactly what I pay for a large cappuccino at my favourite coffee shop. It seems reasonable to me that a full-length ebook should cost about as much as a cup of coffee, so I decided to use the &#8220;coffee standard&#8221; to fix the price. If my coffee shop puts up their price, so will I. (Don&#8217;t worry, they just had a 12.5% price hike, so I don&#8217;t expect any more rises for quite a while.)</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve published the ebook through <a href="https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82958" target="_blank">Smashwords </a>and the Amazon Kindle Store (link soon &#8211; Amazon takes longer than Smashwords to process a book). This makes two editions with two different ISBNs (so, for all the collectors out there, you probably want to buy one of each &#8211; trust me, your grandchildren will thank you). The Smashwords edition will also be released through Barnes &amp; Noble, Sony, Kobo, Apple, Diesel, and Scrollmotion &#8211; but those links will take a while to come through too. I&#8217;m going to experiment soon with direct sales through the <em>TimeSplash</em> website and elsewhere &#8211; but that may be more trouble than it&#8217;s worth. Stay tuned and I&#8217;ll let you know.</p>
<p>Of course, the ebook edition has nothing to do with the print and audiobook editions which are due out very soon. Iambik Audiobooks tells me that late August/early September is the likely release date. eMergent press still has not confirmed a release date for print, but when they do, you will be the first to know.</p>
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		<title>Proof Reading TimeSplash &#8211; Again</title>
		<link>http://blog.timesplash.co.uk/2011/01/09/proof-reading-timesplash-again/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2011 02:30:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Graham</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[ <p>I&#8217;ve mentioned before, I think, that one of the surprises of having a book published is the number of times you have to read it through. I don&#8217;t mean all those times you read it through as you&#8217;re writing it, to make sure that final draft is as fluent and coherent as possible, but [...]]]></description>
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<p>I&#8217;ve mentioned before, I think, that one of the surprises of having a book published is the number of times you have to read it through. I don&#8217;t mean all those times you read it through as you&#8217;re writing it, to make sure that final draft is as fluent and coherent as possible, but all the time after the contract is signed. You work on the book for months with editors of one flavour or another, reading and re-reading, changing, tweaking, polishing, and re-reading yet again. By the time the proofs arrive, you may have read the book a dozen times, and then you&#8217;re doing it again, very, very carefully. But, at last, it goes out to the world and you think you will never have to read that book again.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t suppose I&#8217;ve ever re-read any book half so often as I have re-read <em>TimeSplash</em>. Each of the Austen novels may have had three or four goes through, some Shakespeare plays may have had five or six goes, and I can&#8217;t think of a single sci-fi novel that I&#8217;ve read more than three times.</p>
<p>Yet, when I sold the audio and print rights to <em>TimeSplash </em>to a different publisher, it all started again. I had to read it through for <a href="http://www.enewman.co.uk/" target="_blank">Emma</a> (who reads the book in <a href="http://www.bigbadmedia.com/TimeSplash/" target="_blank">the audio version</a>) looking for foreign words and names and recording how I think they should be pronounced, then I had to listen to it, chapter by chapter, as Emma recorded it, looking for technical problems and speakos (the speech equivalent of a typo). Then I had another opportunity to edit it for the print version, so another careful read-through, and now I have the print proofs before me and I have to read it very, very carefully, yet again.</p>
<p>What am I up to? Fifteen re-reads and a listen? Since the book was signed to a publisher!</p>
<p>I think that&#8217;s enough, don&#8217;t you? It&#8217;s time somebody else read it.</p>
<p>It would be natural to assume I hate the sight of <em>TimeSplash </em>by now, that every time I go near it I start to sweat and tremble in dread. In fact, I have been very pleasantly surprised that the book is still readable even after all those many times. And I think that is for two reasons. One is that I actually like my own writing. There are still passages in <em>TimeSplash </em>that I really enjoy reading, that still touch me, or amuse me. After a lifetime of writing, you&#8217;d hope you would have found a voice you like, wouldn&#8217;t you? I really enjoyed writing <em>TimeSplash </em>and I really liked my protagonists. I still feel that enjoyment coming through in the text. It&#8217;s probably narcissism, I suppose, but I&#8217;m very glad that I didn&#8217;t write the book to suit anyone else but myself, because by now I&#8217;d be certifiable after re-reading it so often.</p>
<p>The other reason I can still get something out of my sixteenth time through is because of the world I built for the book. I&#8217;m very meticulous about world-building. I do masses of research and I work through all the details of every social, political and technological invention I make to ensure that the whole has coherence and integrity. Now, when I read it, a word or phrase will remind me of that background work, most of it probably invisible to the reader. I note the size and power output of F2 generators, I note the titles of police and security officers, and the structures and procedures of the organisations they work for, with great satisfaction, knowing they are right. Silly things really, intended to add rich texture to the world and create a feeling of reality for the reader, but some of them have helped keep me engaged &#8211; and sane &#8211; through the sixth, tenth, twelfth re-readings.</p>
<p>And the good news is, I&#8217;ll finish the proof reading today! Another milestone passed as <em>TimeSplash </em>heads into print.</p>
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		<title>The TimeSplash Non-Stop Round-the-World Twitter Tour</title>
		<link>http://blog.timesplash.co.uk/2010/01/16/the-timesplash-non-stop-round-the-world-twitter-tour/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Jan 2010 11:17:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Graham</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[ <p>With just a month to go before the release of TimeSplash, I&#8217;m pleased to say the edits are all behind us and I&#8217;ll be seeing the galleys soon. It&#8217;s time to get down to some serious promotion.</p> <p>You already know about the TimeSplash Blog Tour. I&#8217;ll be giving you some more details as the [...]]]></description>
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<p>With just a month to go before the release of <em>TimeSplash</em>, I&#8217;m pleased to say the edits are all behind us and I&#8217;ll be seeing the galleys soon. It&#8217;s time to get down to some serious promotion.</p>
<p>You already know about the <em>TimeSplash </em>Blog Tour. I&#8217;ll be giving you some more details as the start date approaches, but, for now, let me just say I have some great venues lined up. If you are kind enough to follow me, I shall be taking you to some of the most interesting writing blogs on the Web.</p>
<p>Today, though, I want to mention a magnificent event I have planned for the 24 hours immediately after the release: the <em>TimeSplash </em>non-stop round-the-world Twitter tour!</p>
<p>OK. This is going to sound crazy but here&#8217;s how it will work. From 7pm to 8pm New York time, I will be tweeting about the book to everybody in the GMT-5hrs <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_zone">timezone</a>. This includes all of Eastern USA, about a quarter of Canada, plus Cuba, Peru, Ecuador and the Bahamas.</p>
<p>As 8pm strikes, I will move west by one timezone, to GMT-6 hours, where it will again be 7pm. I&#8217;ll be jumping backwards in time! This first jump puts me in another chunk of Canada and the USA, and includes most of Mexico along with El Salvador, Costa Rica and so on. I&#8217;ll be tweeting at those guys until 8pm too. Then I move west again.</p>
<p>Each hour I move on, going steadily westward over the next 24 hours until I&#8217;m in the GMT-4 hours timezone between 7pm and 8pm the next day (talking to Chile, Peru, parts of Brazil and a teensy bit of Canada, among others.) What this means is that, wherever you live in the world, at 7 &#8211; 8pm* on the evening of 15th or 16th February, I&#8217;ll be tweeting at you about <em>TimeSplash</em>. For me, it will be 24hours of it being 7 &#8211; 8 pm!</p>
<p>Of course, some hours may be quieter than others. At GMT-1 and -2, I&#8217;ll be in the middle of the Atlantic ocean. GMT+7 will find me in the frozen wastes of central Russia. GMT+10 to +8 should be relatively lively though as I cross Australia (along with Japan, China and another chunk of Russia).</p>
<p>I know it sounds crazy and I&#8217;m painfully aware that everyone I&#8217;ve tried to explain it to has either failed to understand it, or failed to see why anyone would want to do such a thing. And, of course, any tweets I make will be visible to the whole world at once, not confined to a single timezone. But I&#8217;m launching an ebook here. It will be available to everyone on the Internet who can access the major online bookshops. And that&#8217;s nearly everybody in the whole darned world! Sitting in the bookshop in the local mall signing bookmarks (or whatever) seems far too limited in scope for what is really happening. So I want to visit everywhere in the world, for just one hour, to say hello and to tell people about my book.</p>
<p>I hope you&#8217;ll indulge me by being around at 7pm to 8pm your local time* to give me a wave as I pass through your town.</p>
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<p>*<small>I don&#8217;t know when everybody&#8217;s daylight savings time is, so I may be there an hour early. I&#8217;ll be following the Sun. If you have local daylight savings, please make the adjustment.</small></p>
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		<title>One Giant Step for TimeSplash</title>
		<link>http://blog.timesplash.co.uk/2010/01/10/one-giant-step-for-timesplash/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jan 2010 00:58:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Graham</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[ <p>Edit, v., to suffer. Contr. of  head hit, from the ancient publishing practice of whacking an author about the head with a contract until he or she submits.</p> <p>At last I think &#8211; I hope! &#8211; the publisher&#8217;s edits are finished on TimeSplash. The text is now as good as it can be, considering [...]]]></description>
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<blockquote><p>Edit, v., to suffer. Contr. of  <em>head</em> <em>hit</em>, from the ancient publishing practice of whacking an author about the head with a contract until he or she submits.</p></blockquote>
<p>At last I think &#8211; I hope! &#8211; the publisher&#8217;s edits are finished on <em>TimeSplash</em>. The text is now as good as it can be, considering what the mob at Lyrical had to work with. So polished, in fact, that I can see my bruises in it.</p>
<p>I honestly didn&#8217;t know editing was going to be so traumatic. I thought it was just a process of spotting a few mistakes, correcting typos, tidying up the prose here and there. Boy was I ever wrong! Everything about the book came under review, from the use of hyphens to the fundamental premises of the whole story! Over the past few months I have had to argue the case for just about every plot decision and character description, every piece of world-building, word-choice and comma. It has been, in a word, tricky. Worst of all were my struggles against &#8220;house style&#8221; &#8211; which was not always good style in my view.</p>
<p>However, it is all over now. The battles are done and the manuscript is, for better or worse, finished &#8211; at least to the point where no further issues are outstanding, and no-one has the strength left to raise any more. <em>TimeSplash </em>is moving into production and it&#8217;s still on schedule.</p>
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